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critical writing
fall '24
​A 12-week intensive camp (60 minutes, once per week) geared for our 11 to 14 year olds who are ready to dive into the next phases of critical writing (e.g transition words, citation of quotes/evidence, cohesion in written expression)!
T.OTs in the ECLIPSE CAMP2.0 will learn how to...
IMPROVE LETTER FORMATION
VISUAL & FINE MOTOR ABILITIES
STRENGTHEN SENTENCE WRITING PRAGMATICS
VISUAL MOTOR, FINE MOTOR, VISUAL PERCEPTUAL, AND MOTOR COORDINATION ABILITIES.
READ & ANALYZE AN ARTICLE
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READING COMPREHENSION AND CRITICAL THINKING SKILLS
CRITICAL WRITING SKILLS, WRITTEN EXPRESSION
PEER EDITING
WRITTEN EXPRESSION
INTRO TO ESSAY WRITING
critical writing camp
logisitics
who
Returning Comets or Eclipse Campers (11.5 to 14 years old)​
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Prerequisites:
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Must be deemed eligible after screener
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Enrolled in school / home schooled
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Must show behavioral readiness (e.g. able to follow multi-step directions).
1-2 Adults to 12 T.OTS per Group.
Groups led by a licensed & registered occupational therapist.
Rate: $47.50 per hour/class after initial deposit.
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Deposit: $150 at Registration
Two payment plan options available:
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Pay Up Front: $20 off via Zelle
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3 Monthly Payments of $190
Mandatory $30 materials fee.
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what
This course focuses on teaching critical writing abilities while remediating academic based fine motor/visual motor skills like:
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Enforcing Letter Formation
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Sentence Pragmatics (e.g. indenting, spacing, casing)
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Article Analysis
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Critical Writing​
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Peer Editing
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Sizing letters to a more age appropriate size
where & how
Address: 14471 Chambers Rd. #100, Tustin
* NO CAMPS: Thanksgiving Week (11/24/24 to 12/1/24)
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Time: 5:45 to 6:45 PM (60 Minutes)
Days: Thursday
Dates: 9/26/24 to 12/19/24
Directions:
1. Register for camps & pay the $150 deposit to hold the spot.
2. I will contact you to schedule our mandatory 30 minute screener ($55). ​
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If the camps are not deemed appropriate at this time, $55 of the $150 deposit will be refunded to cover the screener fee.
3. An invoice with the payment plan option selected will be presented on the day of the screener.
4. There is a 3% service fee for payments made via cc.
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Jennell Chang is a licensed/registered occupational therapist who is bringing OT based strategies to all. However, she is not operating as anyone's private OT unless otherwise determined by an assessment with her.
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In emergent situations (e.g. natural disasters, Jennell falling ill/quarantined, etc), camps MAY be held via online.
intensive camp discounts
Pay Up Front via Zelle: Savings vary depending on camp
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Pay deposit online to hold your spot.
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Schedule mandatory screener with Jennell via hello@totfinemotor.com
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At the screener, if it is determined that the camp is an appropriate fit, you will be provided an invoice.
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Pay the remaining balance on the invoice via Zelle or Credit Card.